Oh I really like the instruments you used in this! I know it's a work in progress, but I'd say the second half starts to drag a little bit. Maybe throw in a new lead instrument, or move to a new key. I'd also try bringing the clap and snare at 57 sec down a little bit. Otherwise it's very nice to listen to and a great start to a track!

That's a pretty good composition dude! The instruments you used seem pretty default though. If this were recorded on actual or high quality instruments, it'd be a pretty neat little track! You've definitely got the beats down and it builds and pays off well. Keep at it!

Not bad dude! If I were to offer some constructive criticism, I'd just say the mixing isn't quite there yet. Mostly at very beginning, but I hear some more subtle instruments in the back that I'd love to see come forth a little more. Something I still struggle a lot with is getting drums to match up with the rest of a track. I've lost count of how many times I make a track and listen back to it only to realize the drums are twice as loud as everything else. If you can, try listening back to your track through a variety of audio devices to see if any issues come up. It can be a hassle, but it's totally worth it in the long run!